You
And I,
Are now 'one'.
Our bodies clasped together,
And our souls enjoined forever.
Can anyone dare break us, try.
Only if you can find 'the other'.
P.S. This is my 25th post.What can be more rewarding than knowing that my blog rank/score has jumped from 50 to 71. Muaaahh......to all my blog friends and readers.
55 comments:
Lovely! Just lovely!
Wow 25 posts already! I'm not even sure how many I have hahaha.
Ciao Xx!
i am feeling submerged some where .....ahhhh!!
:)
Only if you can find 'the other'...
beautiful expression...
I really liked the piece of prose..
and congrats for the 25th post and the jump..this blog deserves many such jumps...
HI Shas,
very nice expressions that u have poured in to this post ..well done.
congratuations on the rank .. all the best for ur blogging ..enjoy well :)
@ TJ,
Thanks! friend. I bet, you have more posts than I.
@ Makk,
You are submerged where???
Or are you getting drowned???
@ RSV,
Thanks!! for all the wishes. Wish you the same and even more.
@ Being Pramoda,
Thanks!!!
Happy blogging to you also.
=)
hey... beautiful lines.. :)
@ ash89,
Thanks!! =)
Hmmm........simple yet beautiful!
Cheers
@ Indian Pundit,
Thanks!! =)
hi shas..thanks for commenting on my blog... Congrats on ur 25... its great that ur indivine has gone up from 50 to 71.... what an improvement... mine is very slow... first 71..76..now 77... what did u do to increse ur indi rank??
@ Shankar,
Its my pleasure.
Thanks!
Indivine is one big mystery which every indiblogger is trying to decode....lolzz. Seriously even i don't know what really works. For two consecutive months i was hanging on 50. So, now 71 seems like a giaaaaaaant leap.
Don't worry Shankar, slow and steady wins the race. I really like your blog. The fact that you have so many loyal readers. That itself is a big reward.
Happy Blogging!!
Congratulation!! Shas..
The poem is very sweet!!
@ Swatantra,
Thanks!!
Hey shas!
Awesome is the only word that escapes my mouth!!
Congrats on tour feat!
@ Shruti,
Thanks dear.
last expression was speechless and the picture adds much value :)...kudos for yur 25 th post...keep it up!
@ Harry,
Thanks!! =)
Hey shas,check out my 55fiction :)
Thanks for your comment.
Well ....i am submerged with feelings..
i luv to be drawned..
:)
Can anyone dare break us, try.
Only if you can find 'the other'.
Quite poignant and open to interpretation. I love poetry which makes my lazy brain think.
@ Zeon,
Welcome. There's some problem with your comment page. Plz add more options for posting comment like name, url, open ID etc.
@ Paritosh,
Thanks!! Am glad my words could nudge your brain.
Hi there,
Sorry for getting late over here.
I really loved your blog. The poem is too good.
Congrats for the rank on Indiblogger. I too got 71. :)
Shall read your other posts soon.
Happy Blogging.
@ Sunil,
Welcome!! to my blog.
Thanks n congrats to you too for the new indirank.
Hope you have a good time here. =)
Very nice -esp. that last line makes all the difference....
@ UL,
Thanks!!
=)
25! Not bad!
500 is not that far away my friend! All it takes is perseverance.
@ Amitabh,
Hope i will have the patience and perseverance to reach that number. Kudos to you for having reached that number.
Hey, visit my blog http://rahulsharmaspeaks.blogspot.com/
there is something waiting for you :)
Hope you like it:)
beautifully put
@ RSV,
Sure.
@ Naveen Kumar,
Thanks!
Welcome!!! to Shas land.
Beautiful expression ! Liked the last line "only if you can find the other"
@ Lakshmi Rajan,
Thanks!!
hmmm.. your comments seems to be very encouraging.... thanks a lot...
@ Shanksr,
You are always welcome. After all what are friends for.
=)
That was a beautiful poem Shas :) My first visit to ur blog...
"Only if you can find 'the other'."... wonderful :)
@ Priyanka,
Thanks!
Welcome to my blog!!
Beautiful, simply beautiful.
@ Shail,
Thanks for dropping in here. =)
That was a well-thought of post..!!I liked it.!!
Shas,just a request do post in visible colors on black screen..!God,it took me great amount of pain to read this...!!
@ Meher,
Hi! welcome to my blog. Am sorry for the inconvenience caused. The page colour of the blog is pale, its generally black when the bog is still loading. Will try to do something that would decrease the loading time and hence darkness.
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@ Bloggertown,
Thanks! for considering me. Will definitely check it out.
cooootieee coooo....! :D
Tumhare blogs mein yeh jadoo hai ke hum khiche khiche chale aate hain ..aana hota hai padne ke liye kahi aur chale jaate hain (imagination)
Bond is always unbreakable ...though practically it seems ...loose n breakable but the bond from inside is solid n break proof
@ Hi! vivek,
Hume jaan ke khusi hua ki aapko meri ye kavita pasand aayi aur aap khiche chale aaye.
Shukriya!!
Perfect! One of the best love poems I have ever read :) Kudos to the poet!
@ Chandrama,
Thanks! for the compliments.
Shas,
perfect...!!
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