Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Mehfil





Naa shama chahiye
Naa parwane chahiye
Bas kuch tute hue dil chahiye
Sama toh yunhi bandh jaata hai.

Jaam ki kya jaroorat
Hum toh gum peete hain
Bas aankhon me todi nami chahiye
Mehfil toh yunhi jam jaati hai.  

59 comments:

Makk said...

Heyy ..

Wet one!

Shas said...

@ Makk,
Thanks for ur comment but i didn't get it.

Vivek said...

Nice one!!

But why are you drinking gum!!?? :P

Vivek.

Shalini said...

wah wah!

Gautu said...

wha wha kya baat hai....jaam jaye gi mhefil jab milenge do bichade hue yaar..:D

Shas said...

@ Vivek,
Thanks!
Coz i didnt get vodka.. :b

Shas said...

@ Shalini,
Sukriya!!

Shas said...

@ Gautu,
Thanks! yaa then u wud need only memories.

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

Nice one...:D

Shas said...

@ Sid,
Thanks!!

Tauseef said...

Sama toh yunhi bandh jaati hai.

should say

jaata hai instead of jaati hai.

anyway, nice.

Shas said...

@ Tauseef,
Welcome to my blog.
Thanks for correcting me. =)

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

Good one :-)

What's in a name... said...

Very nice..
Thanks for visiting me..
You have a lovely blog, adding you in my blogroll..

Shas said...

@ Raaji,
Welcome to my space.
Thanks!! =)

Shas said...

@ What's in a name,
Welcome to my blog.
Thanks for adding me. Hope u have a good time here. =)

Pooja said...

Blog rolling u!

awesome post!

Shas said...

@ Pooja,
Welcome to mah blog.
Thanks a ton.

Megha said...

Very Nice :)

Shas said...

@ Megha,
Thanks!!

Ashwin said...

Wow ! What a lovely post... Direct Dil - Se.. A touching one though...

rahul s said...

hey...good thought.. :-p.

gum peete peete bore ho jata hai..tabi hame jaam ki serooreth hai..
like every day eating roti will be boring. Its good if once in a while we try out biriyani.. :-p.

rahul s said...

hey...good thought.. :-p.

gum peete peete bore ho jata hai..tabi hame jaam ki serooreth hai..
like every day eating roti will be boring. Its good if once in a while we try out biriyani.. :-p.

sm said...

very nice poem

Shas said...

@ Ashwin,
Thankx! Direct dil se....hmmm.... kind of...

Shas said...

@ Rahul S,
Welcome to my bloggie.
Thankx. Will try ur advice.....lolzzz

Shas said...

@ sm,
Thankx!! =)

vivek said...

Nice Lil Poem ..some time touch..

Glenn Kun said...

elow^^. welcome to my blog. my other blog is still under construction. wahah

Shas said...

@ Vivek,
Thankx !!

Shas said...

@ Glenn Kun,
Thanks!! Welcome to my blog. Waiting for it to be up soon.

Nipun said...

Thanks for visiting my blog.
aadab arz hai ji!!
That was hilarious.
Loved the poem.
Think there are not that much GUM in lyf.
Waise Sama to ban hi jata h....:)

Cheers

Nuts

P.s. I m following u now...:)

Shas said...

@ Nipun,
Welcome to my blog!!
Thankx for ur comments n for following me. Hav a fun-time here.

The Aspirant said...

so short, but yet so real........

ani said...

justju jiski thi usko to na paaya humne
iss bahane duniya zaroor dekh lee humne
kab mili thi kab bichri thi humein yaad nahin
zindagi tujhko to bas khwab mein dekha humne

Hirdu said...

came for the first time from a old comment... :) liked the template and few posts...shall revisit very soon to read more...enjoy the joy...

dattaabhishek said...

Uff!! Simply beautiful. Liked your way of expression. Truly touching.

Shas said...

@ The Aspirant,
Thanks! n welcome to my space.

Sam!! said...

Such a lovely way to express... liked it:))

Thanks for visiting me.. hope to hv you back:)

Take care

HaRy!! said...

from heart eh?

DayDreamer said...

Hey Shas..

First of all thanks for visiting my blog..and leaving such wonderful comments..

Went through some of your previous posts and they are b'ful..

Great work..you capture the emotions so well through your posts..

Shas said...

@ ani,
Thanks for dropping by n those awesome lines. =)

Shas said...

@ Hirdu,
Welcome to my blogo space. Hope to see more of you.

Shas said...

@ duttabhishek,
Thanks friend. =)

Shas said...

@ sam,
Welcome n yeah sure. :)

Shas said...

@ Hary,
:D

Shas said...

@ Daydreamer,
Welcome to my blog and thanks for taking pains to go through my previous posts. As far as my comments r concerned you deserved them. :)

Makk said...

Bas aankhon me todi nami chahiye
Mehfil toh yunhi jam jaati hai.


these lines made whole post Wet!

Your new template is nice.

Shas said...

@ Makk,
Hi! thanks for xplaining it.

Bharadwaaj said...

Hey Shas, thanks for your comments.. Made me visit MY blog after almost a year.. I have written a bit after that (can't believe it was more than two years back)but have decided against posting them.i don't want my popularity (or to be more precise my stupidity)to spread beyond my friends who are pretty used to my brand of madness... If you're interested here's my email id: bharath10@gmail.com

Bharadwaaj said...

Hey Shas, thanks for your comments.. Made me visit MY blog after almost a year.. I have written a bit after that (can't believe it was more than two years back)but have decided against posting them.i don't want my popularity (or to be more precise my stupidity)to spread beyond my friends who are pretty used to my brand of madness... If you're interested here's my email id: bharath10@gmail.com

Shas said...

@ Bharadwaaj,
Thanks for dropping by.
Wish u could continue blogging ur writings. We are the real losers coz we will be deprived of getting a taste of ur creativity (sanity/insanity) n wisdom.
Hope u change ur mind. =)

Mads... said...

nice write it is..liked yr thought process..:)

Shas said...

@ Mads,
Thanks!!

Shas said...

@ Mads,
Thanks!!

Arpit Rastogi said...

Wah-Wah..
Kya solid mara hai.. :D

sonu anand said...

niceeeeeeeeee :)

Shas said...

@ Arpit,
Shukriya!!!

Shas said...

@ Sonu,
Thank!!! =)