Everything has come to a crashing end.
Days of anxiety and confusion
Is over
Finally Over.
Yet scared to utter the word 'Finally'
Freedom embraces to console
Yet sadness looms above
Uncertainty floats
But joy is not far
Its just that the moment pricks
It bleeds not
But it troubles
A nagging pain
That splinters laughter into
Thousand of tiny broken glasses
Each piece mirroring
The dance of Fate.
A glint of hope peeps from far
Far far away
Like another sunrise
That waits to devour the darkness
A wait that seems endless
Yet a wait worth waiting
To end
The End.
63 comments:
Woow.. what an amazing way to put it across... Even I am scared to say that the Murky water is finally clear.. Aint so sure where my future is taking me.. A sense of excitement coupled with a feeling of uncertainty...
Lucky to be the first reader to post a comment... hehe..
Ciao..
kash !!!
@ Ashwin,
Thanks! Happy to see u now :) and even more Happy to know that someone actually read my post at this hour of the night coz i thought that everybody must be snoring away to glory except the ones who are on the opposite side of the globe at the moment... :D
Ya, true. There are times when a moment is filled with opposing feelings or emotions that makes one wonder whether to be happy or sad, to rejoice or mourn.
All the best for ur future. Am sure where ever it may lead you, you will definitely succeed n touch new horizons.
Take care n keep smiling!! =)
ahh... I can so so relate to this.
Sigh.
Very well written.
@ Raaji,
Thanks!! =)
Very very well written! The use of words and imagery kept surprising me at every line. Good work!! :)
@ Arslan,
Thanks a lot dude.
=)
dead end.... goood articulation of words!..all emotions ripped apart eh!
I hope everyone has a happy end, satisfied and happy to look back.
Just found the contrast in your words, nicely written.
well..endings are not all happy but this is interpretation is really awesome..you gave me another meaning of end..:)
(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)
@ Harry,
Ur right dude!
@ megha,
Thanks!! =)
@ Ayu,
Thanks! Am glad to know that you found something different in it.
thanks for dropping by yesterday...you should try out 55 sometime. your words are amazingly descriptive and love the story you told. hope you have a great weekend.
Yet scared to utter the word 'Finally
so true... we are not just scared of that word, we wanna believe its still not "finally"
brilliant poem shas... nice use of words... loved every word
Cheers!
Tavish
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@ Brian,
Welcome to my space n thanks for ur comments.
Will surely try the 55 in poetry.
:)
@ Tavish,
Thanks!! ya, at times its hard to accept that things have come to an end.
Nice , well some time its good ..to start afresh .... n 4rget whats gone ... there are ..other new things waiting ...to be explored ...den sticking @ something ...which ..has ..nothing in store ..
Very well expressed.. liked it.. :))
Take care,
Sam..
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@Shas: awww..hehe..those animated icons came from laymark.com x)
@ Sam,
Thanks!
@ Vivek,
Thanks!
@ Ayu,
Thanks dear! =)
That mixed feeling some times is so difficult to understand....I feel as if you have written this for me:P
Another rich contribution...
I wish those shreds of anguish that go on mirroring dancing diva of destiny rupture all veils of delusions, tear off all shackles of desires in life so generously lent to it in merging both the beginning and the end into a single droplet of completeness in His grand pool of creations!
Regards,
And she won't ever see the end .. the end is not the destination! :)
Sourav .. in love with me and life!! :)
"But joy is not far
Its just that the moment pricks
It bleeds not
Yet it troubles"
we all reach closed doors
and sometimes mistake them for cul-de- sac.One might reach the dead ends but the journey continues just the question of appropriate turn....
nice read.....
@ Anamika Surekha,
Thanks!!
Happy to know that it resonates ur
life, too.
@ Saibal Burman,
Thanks! =)
Sourav,
Hi! Who isn't ready to see the end. The end is another beginning.
:)
@ Sunil,
Thanks! Rightly said. A turn is required but alas, many mistake the end to be the dead end.
Serenity also hold in the way we end the things! Sometimes 'the end' is very important than how we traveled our journey or how we started. Nice write!!
Well articulated!
Loved the last para!
This is what exactly happens with all of us. When its over finally, we are still apprehensive about something uncertain
"Waiting to end The End.." Awesome !
dawn is well worth waiting for...
@ Neilina,
Rightly said. We should welcome the END coz it can be an end to ones ordeal. It is necessary and should be welcomed as much as we welcome a new beginning. It should not be viewed in pessimistic terms always.
@ Sugar Cube,
Thanks!!
@ Insignia,
Uncertainty will always be there coz future is unknown though predictable at times yet not sure.
@ Tushar Sathe,
Thanks!! =)
@ Shadow,
True! Its worth waiting for a new dawn but its the length of the wait which is testing.
My first time here... This was well written.
Hellooooo Shas! How are you doing lately? So sorry I didn't stop by sooner. I got caught up is so much stuff -_-'.
I adore your writing! You can capture emotions in such a delicate and interesting way. I loved this part:
"That splinters laughter into
Thousand of tiny broken glasses"
I can't really explain why though. Keep up the good work and now I always read it!
Take care Xx!
how to you come with such amazing lines all the time?:) loved it
how can it be the end if someone's still waiting? :)
well first, thanks for stopping by :)
I just totally adore the first five lines.
Beautiful end!!
Hope never is far..and makes the sunrise worth waiting for..
Beautifully written.
beautifully xpressed shas......
All wad is goin on today is nthing but d beginning of an end....an end dat hopefully led to d start of a new and beautiful world...
Its beautiful :)
I liked it :)
@ Sid,
Welcome friend n thanks!!
Hiya TJ,
Nice to see ya after a long long time. Thanks dear.
@ Smirithi Rao,
Thanks but its tough actually, it takes me real long to write a poetry though u may find a lot of poems in my blog.
@ Blunt edges,
The end of one event has already taken. The person is waiting for another chapter to begin and waiting for the 'waiting period' to end.
I hope this answers your question and i have not confused you further..:D
@ Maha,
Thanks =)
@ Swatantra,
Thanks!! :)
@ comfortablynam,
True. Its worth waiting for it though the waiting period is killing.
@ The Aspirant,
Thanks!! Yaa, ur right.
@ Satyu,
Thanks!!
lovely, life circles...so there's really no end to it sometimes...
@ UL,
Rightly said...an end is jus anothr beginning...
love the hopeful ending!
@ Shadow,
Thanks!!
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