I could go far away.
Free from deadlines, electricity bills, stalkers...
Free from every care, far away from the prying eyes.
I wish...
I could lie down on a grassy field. Wrapped in solitude and pastoral bliss.
Hear my own heartbeat. Feel the cold breeze on my face. Look into the wide eyes of the blue expanse and say here i come with my arms flung wide open. See the vast blue stare back at me silently and shamelessly. Watch the sky turn from blue to crimson to ebony. Let the darkness snatch me away from the summer light and seduce me by sprinkling millions of diamonds in the sky. Let the moon come out of its hiding and play hide and seek with me. Let him bathe me with his silvery presence turning me into princess of the night. Let the singers of the night sing their songs and put me to sleep in the nature's lap.
51 comments:
Hey, I can very well relate to that......I often feel the same.
@ Sunil,
Hi! Welcome to my space after a loooong time.
I wish i could find such a blissful place in the middle of an urban jungle.
Very well expressed.
Your piece sparks a similar wish in my mind.
@ Sneha,
Thanks!!
Hmm Nice ..
I feel the same , way for a break-away from all the things n be in peace for some time.
Amen!
Keep Wishing!
Very natural flow....I envy the way you have expressed...
Best wishes,
AWWW.. THATS REALLY SWEET
LOVED IT :)
Nothing is impossible Shas. Take a few days off, switch off ur cell [or take a new prepaid card - this wud help u keep in touch with the world in emergencies] and go on vacation. m sure u wud find a reasonably descent place around u [remember "far" is no more a word in this era's dictionary, tak a flight is necessary] hear to ur mind. have a good time :)
Ah!
How I wish if this all could come true...
Best wishes,
Cheers!
Rashmi :)
Very well expressed.. loved it.. :))
Take care
222222 much stress eh!! tak a break! sure works!
HaRy
hmmmm... you wish!!!...:P <--that's sarcastic...:P
Very vivid..strangely soothing.. keep writing!
so sweet..
BTW I wish the same...:)
Keep it up..
Cheers
Nuts
@ Vivek,
@ Thanks!!
@ Makk,
Thankssss!!
@ Saibal Burman,
Thanks!! This is a bit funny coz the fact is that uptill till now i have been envying u...:D
@ Chocolate lover,
Thanks!!
awww..well-said..actually i also would want that to happen..its like an escape to this busy world we are living it..
so great post~! :P
(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)
Keep wishing ...Real nice post.First time on your blog probably will be visiting often now:)
wow....u made me feel every thing u wrote....
@ Sawan,
Ur right that nothing is impossible these days but there are priorities that holds us back at times.
Hoping that am able to get away sometime in the future n fulfill my wish.
@ Rashmi,
Thanks! Even i hope that it becomes true soon.
@ Sam,
Thanks!!
@ Harry,
Hmmm.......i think so. Thanks! hope it happens soon.
@ Sid,
hi hi....y is that so?? Even am a human being... :b
@ writerzblock,
Thanks! friend for ur positive comment coz i still feel literary-lly challenged.
@ Nipun,
Thanks! i hope that even ur wish comes true.
@ Ayu,
Thanks! Ya, one can term it as an escape but for me it would be a retreat or a rejuvenating moment coz i need to recharge myself after a draining phase.
P.S. Ok will post my reply on ur comment box.
@ Anamika Sureka,
Welcome to my blog n thanks for ur comment. I hope u have a good time here.
C ya soon!!
@ Ryn,
Thanks!! Am glad u could feel it. Thats the greatest compliment that i could have for my expression. =)
"My Immortal" first thing i noticed about your blog when i jumped in.. i simply love this song. Cudnt leave the page without listening the complete song..
And definitely i wish these fantasies of yours come true with me some day.
@Shas: thanks for liking my blog and i wish also to see him more often x3
(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)
@ Rahil,
Thanks n Welcome back buddy! Nice to see u here after a long time. Glad n amused to kno dat u liked d song n stayed here to hear the complete song.
Keep visiting!!
@ Ayu,
Ur most welcome. Hope ur wish is fulfilled soon.
Hi Shas,
All what you've written here are true... i've also felt the same way before... i enjoyed the read!!!:D
P.S. Let me thank you for visiting my blog and appreciating my works... thank you so much... i hope you enjoyed it and lookin' forward for more of you there!!!:)
Good day!!!:)
Keep safe!!!:)
>kelvin
Oh wow.. A fantastic way of expressing your feeling.. Very well conveyed...
Just one thing that struck me.. Stalkers?? Umm Great... U are a mini celebrity gal... :)
Cheers ..
Kash!!!
Yes I wondered about stalkers too :)
You know you should make that wish reality, it is entirely upto you what you do with life - dont let it rule you...
anyway logic aside- a very creative play of words....keep writing and dont forget to live life...it is momentary...
you made me nostalgic....a beautiful dream I always see
Hey yours is by far the best blog I have seen!! A lot of work and a lot of effort has been put into it! Hats off! Do teach me some of the tricks!! Adding it to my fav blogs link! :)
heyy..thnx a lots for stoppin by at my space, otherwise i wouldnt hav reached here..rlly liked yr post..i jus second yr thoughts..well versed..:)
nice blog you have..will keep visiting..:)
@ Windowlad,
Welcome n thanks!!
Will definitely visit ur blog.
@ Ashwin,
Thanks!! Well am no mini celebrity, i wish i was.... :D Here am using the term in a bit modified sense. I mean the people who encroach ur personal space n nearly stalk u.
@ UL,
Thanks! Ya, life is short. I will try to follow ur advice. I guess my reply to Ashwin has answered ur doubt.
@ Megha,
Thanks!! I hope that ur dream comes true, too.
@ Divyadugar,
Welcome to my blog!! Happy to know that u liked my blog and thanks for being so generous in ur praise. Will surely help u out.
Hope to see here more of u.
@ Mads,
Welcome n Thanks for paying a return visit to me. Glad to know that u liked my blog.
Too much work and pressure huh?
@ Shalini,
Yaa....
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