I breathe onto dry leaves
Playing God
Thinking of resurrecting them
from their crumbling sleep.
They did not wake up
but rustled away
Stating they had left my world
Alas i forgot
I was a mortal, too.
P.S. I had published this post before but had removed it the same day. So, re-publishing it for those who had missed it.
62 comments:
Very rich...very rich !
Regards,
Well played...!
You are Immortal by the way.
M M
Words can come alive too :)
Sourav .. in love with me and life!! :)
Beautiful!!
Take care,
Sam..
God is great isn't ... its only words ..which changes the complexion of everything ....it only words that i have....to say god ..u are really gr8...you hv something 4 all ...still all wants more ...just like a ignorant child ha ha
Playing God is a step towards purity.
Nice...
hmm..yeah..there are things we cannot do because we are humans BUT we should be glad about it..because if we can be GOD..we would forget him and his endless love for us, right..?
(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)
@ Saibal Burman,
Thanks!!
Take care =)
@ Makk,
Thanks!
Hi! Am a mere mortal human being probably will become immortal only after death =)
@ Sam,
Thanks!!
U2 take care! =)
@ Sourav,
Yes, words can become alive.
@ Vivek,
Ya, human is an ever hungry being. When satiated, it gets replaced with another.
rustled leaves........
brings back memories.
Nothing is replaceable ..when it comes to emotions ....they are real ..n true friendship , love are some entities which are not replaceable @ all , remains till life time , other than that are variable things which keep on changing w/o ones choice ,as change is other form of life.
@ Hobo,
Hmm...can be if only played right. The fact is that Humans will remain a human only even if they assume themselves to be playing God for a while.
@ Shalini,
Thankz!!
@ Ayu,
Rightly said. Ya, we may forget God and may even misuse the Godliness that one may posses after all we humans are prone to worldly vices.
@ Haddock,
Ya, it does. The sound and the image conjures up another image n sound that of ruffling pages of the past or of an old diary.
How much Humans love to play God,but alas ... nice one shas
TC
CU
Beautiful!!
Wow... very short and simple yet very appealing to both heart and mind!!! Cheers!!!:)
Good day!!!:)
God Bless!!!:)
>Kelvin
This is good
Its beautiful :)
I loved it :)
Takecare
Loved reading it .. yeah Pity we are all mortal..
it so happens that things we care the most about in life are taken from you too soon.. and the less important ones NEVER GO AWAY ...
Beautiful poem:)
really very well thought dear..keep weaving ur emotions like this and sharing like this with us....lots of luv
Hi SHas, thanks for repuplishing the poem. Its worth enjoying.
Thanks.
@ Compassion Unlimited,
Thanks....
@ Swatantra,
Thanks :)
@ Windowlad,
Thanks for ur appreciation!!!
@ The Survivor,
Thanks :)
@ Satyu,
Thanks!!
@ Bikram,
Thanks!! Ya, its almost like why do good people die so soon and evil men seem to live the longest.
@ Besakhtagi,
Thanks!! Sure :)
@ Being Pramoda,
Thanks! Am glad to know that it was worth publishing. :)
Whoa Miss Mortal... u kno how 2 work magic with words. Liked it, why did u take it off btw??
Good one, Shas! :)
Heey Shas! How are you doing?
Ooh again you played with the word wonderfully! I really like it! You certainly know how to words!
Take care,
TJ
Lovely post!!
Very lively feel to the post.
Mortality is a must..:)
Although no one wants to die..
Cheers
Nuts
p.s. Chek my page..
@ Sid,
Thanks! Am glad that the magic worked.. :D
@ Dhanya,
Thanks!!
Grammar was my enemy number 1 in school and I don't want to worry whether this is a transferred epithet or something else. But - 'Crumbling sleep' is beautifully and aptly put.
@ TJ,
Thanks! Am good. Howz u? A
m so sorry i havnt been able to visit ur blog for long. Once am free will read up all the backlog :)
@ Nipun,
Thanks! Sure, will visit your page once am free. Busy with work n other things.
@ Pushkaraj,
Thanks! Well even i couldn't recall it exactly. I jus googled it n you are right, its transferred epithet. Full marks to you :)
Wonderful!
Dear me!!! Such a lovely thought!! Mortal the leaves maybe, but these words are so immortal. Thumbs up!!! :-)
@ Sorcerer,
Thankss!!
@ Insignia,
Thanksss!!!
Lovely poem...very intelligently written
@ Vidya,
Thanks!!
ahhh...serene! :)
read the previous tag as well...neat :)
@ Blunt edges,
Thanks!!
yes i missed many of ur posts sorry for that.......but my presence shows that i afford to miss ur posts too.
u r best in poetic posts.
love it.
Hi Shas,
Thanks for your gracious comments on my blog.Thanks once again, because I could visit ur blog.I think u write beautifully, so keep it going!
www.assorted-platter.blogspot.com
well, yeah sumtyms we really din't feel dat nthing is much worth it coz we r mortal too........
@ Ashu,
Hi! my posts too missed u n ur comments....so now as a part of ur punishment for being absent for so long, you should comment on all the missed posts else.... :D
Thanks for the compliment.
@ Pravin Nair,
Welcome n thanks for visitng my blog. Hope to see you here often.
Happy Blogging!!
@ The Aspirant,
Life is transitory so are other things except the soul :)
loved it ..completely..
the pain of realizing we all are mortals..
yeah, at one point or the other, it pinches...
well written...well thought
Vinz
@ Vinz,
Thanks!
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