I can see what lies in the beyond...
I can decipher the secrets of the unknown...
It is so difficult being a human and yet share the divinity of the immortals.
I can see what lies in the beyond,
Which your mortal eyes cannot.
Wish i could tell you...
The secrets of the soul.
Bearing the curse of life,
I can only watch you
Make those follies.
For you see no reason
And laugh at my counsel.
My heart wants to protect you from every pain
But you seem to court only that.
I know you will blame me for
Hiding the truth from you
And gifting you a painful moment
But you will hardly ever know
That i lived every moment in pain so that i could
Free you from it.
My head stops me from such transgressions
Though my heart longs
To embrace the punishment that it would ensue.
50 comments:
Best things in life remain unsaid....
What a beautiful poem it is. Magical.
@ Sunil,
Thanks!
is that a perspective of GOD? or someone using spy cam :P.. ok jokes apart...
really beautiful poem..
whenever I read the word "unknown"..I somehow feel it is me :).so with that line was wondering wat secrets..
Something wrong, Shas?
@ Unknown,
Well! She is an angel destined to live a human life for a brief period or you can see her as an Oracle(not computer language :p).
You have chosen such an interesting name for yourself that it is bound to figure in most of the places. So, go unearth the treasures/secrets. If you can relate to it then i would say enjoy the bliss.
@ Sourav,
Am fine buds. Thanks for your concern :)
:)
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@ Sourav,
:) :) :)
@ Salman Saeed,
Thanks!
@ HWP,
Thanks!
It seems someone's close to Nirvana :P
Nice one, it is troublesome when the truth itself binds us from revealing it on the one who would be affected by its implications. Its like breathing in a congested room.
Nice lines Shas!
its really beautiful. loved it ^_^
@ Blasphemous Aesthete,
Nirvana or martyrdom? :p
Thanks! BA, yes truth can be stifling at times.
@ Chocolate Lover,
Thanks! =)
These words are like the unspoken words of a Rishi.
@ The Chair Speaks,
Thanks!
Does it really sound like that?? :p
Angel & the Soul Same ! thus says your lovely Poem & ur comment elsewhere..Why not..beautiful .never thought in that angle.. after all the soul reaches the ultimate after Karma & so does the angel..
Angel in a body trap..hmm
nice one
nice poem.....
liked it...:)
i think it would be interesting to know what is coming and not being able to tell, not save them from it...it would be so hard...nice write...
poem sounds like'' warning full of care and consideration''
Well written ,u have put across emotions really well :)
@ Compassion Unlimited
Hmmmm..Angel and the soul ain't the same. Did i mix up the two things, unconsciously? But the way you have connected and drawn a similarity between the two is interesting and made me think, actually.
Thanks! for the lovely msg in my cbox.
@ Clouds,
Thanks!!
@ Brian Miller,
Thanks for the suggestion. Will try to look at it from that point of view next time.
@ Heavenly Muse,
Thanks for dropping in here. Ya, in a way it is.
@ Sathish,
Thanks!!
Beautifully done!
@ Raaji,
Thanks!
painful.... yet its love.
Good One :)
@ Restless Heart,
Thanks!
@ The Survivor,
Thanks! Nice to see you after a long time :)
Sad when this happens, when we tell or advice for someone good and they ignore..
I always think that we shud learn from others mistakes why make them ourselves ..
Loved the poem.. beautiful ...
"That i lived every moment in pain so that i could
Free you from it."
beautiful
@ Bikramjit,
Thanks!
@ Sankoobaba,
Thanks!
beautiful lines and deeper thoughts of you .
loved it!
Keep it up butterfly gal :)
@ Ashu,
Thanks! buddy :)
Sh@s, that's the pain of being in love...there is so much that heart longs and aches and sometimes all u do is sit back and watch...I am really touched with your words....
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a beautiful poem by u shas......
reading it early in d morning made my day......
cheers :)
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@ Palak Vasant,
Thanks!
@ Anonymous,
WElcome! Mr Spammer :)
@ The Aspirant,
Thanks and welcome! Your comment made my day :)
@ Moonshine,
Welcome!
aah nice quite a poem this one.liked it :)
@ Ani_aset,
Thanks!
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