Friday, October 15, 2010
Crumbling
Restlessness is back like the daily newspaper which misses me more than i miss him. Life is strange which has an unusual way of revealing the truth to you. Those little truths makes one feel like a dry leaf fallen off the branch which is at the mercy of wind and breeze. Crumbling at the feet of life, lifted by wind and reduced to dust with time.
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Ur poetic rants are getting better & better :)
Its also easy to relate oneself with ur lines...
keep blogging
cheers !!!
True...
BTW, What made you think that 'newspaper' is a 'he'!! :P
Vivek.
But the same dust nurtures so many plants too !! Dry leaf also gives a purpose for wind & breeze ,I guess,otherwise they will just be blowing !!
Good one Sh, definitely life is strange .
Vivek beat me to it on the gender Bias,LOL.
TC
CU
Hmmm what do i say to that .. its the truth what u said but then a lot depends on ourself tooo
if we stand tall and strong not much can defeat is then and have faith in ourself :)
you take care
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Ciaooo Shas! How are you? I'm doing pretty good! Very busy with illustrating, so I apologize for my lack in commenting :(.
I am always in awe how you construct your sentences! You're so talented with words ^_^! Will you ever like bundle your poems in a book?
Take care lady!!
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wow. rapid flow, but you moved deftly from one though to the next...to dust in the wind...
truth can have that ability of causing restlessness. probably the unknown, the having to look at something we are not totally comfortable with. but look at it, feel it, deal with it, and peace will return...
You sumed it all beautifully!!
kharama kharama chalate rahe hum..
aahista aahista badate rahe hum..
sunsaan si un wadiyon mien ..
yuhi hasate aur rote rahe hum..
after reading this..i felt like i understood..but still dint understand it :P..may be i am trying to analyze the reason behind this post...
Sh@s as @Shadow told.. look at me..feel me..deal with me..peace shall return :P
Let me thank you first for visiting my poetry blog
This is a prose, but, I felt it as a poem..
Nice read n write..
I hear you speak!!
VEry well written
keep it up :)
take care
damn, that was a good one. Is this like your forte?:p
Loved the closing lines the most :)
beautiful
rhythmic
dance of words..
@ Sathish,
Thanks! Happy to know that you could to relate to the post. I hope that they keep getting better :)
@ Vivek,
Don't worry i am not trying to determine the gender of the newspaper here. It can be 'she', also :P
I am straight and could relate to it better as a 'he' rather than she coz i wanted to show a dalliance between restlessness and me. :P
@ Compassion Unlimited,
Wonderful perspective and philosophy on 'purpose' of life.
*Sigh*...If only we could look at the positive side of things, can we appreciate the maladies of life.
I don't belong to the 'male-bashing club' so the gendering of the newspaper was not a biased act. A part of your question has been answered in the reply to Vivek's comment. I hope it answers your question. If you need more clarification then plz let me know :)
@ Bikramjit,
Thanks! Well-said.
A tree does not die when a few leaves falls off its branches. Similarly these small truths does not kill us but somehow it erodes some bits of us. It changes us and the impact is not always positive.
@ TJ,
Wow! Gal, keep up your work!
Thanks! dear for your sweet words but i haven't given a thought to bundle them in a book, yet. The day i will find them worth publishing will give a thought to it.
@ Moonshine,
Thanks! aww...sorry for not being able to visit your blog was busy so couldn't do it before. I hope you have found my footprints there :)
@ Brian Miller,
Thanks!
@ Shadow,
Rightly said :)
@ The Survivor,
Thanks!
@ Unknown,
The more you will try to look for reasons the more confused you will appear :D
As far as your suggestion is concerned. We are doing just that but we can only look at you (your profile pic) and not more than that :P
@ Makk,
Thanks! for those lovely words. Nice to see you after a long time. Hope life is treating you well :)
@ Tomz,
Welcome to my blog and it was a pleasure visiting yours. Thanks for the comment :)
@ Rainboy,
Thanks! Keep listening and thanks for hearing it so patiently :)
@ Kish,
Thanks! It ain't my forte but just trying it out.
@ Harshita,
Thanks!
Restlessness, transience.... crumbling.. you got me thinking about some mean truths we tend to run away from Sh@
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This and your last post made me think! I want to see some smiles here, next time around. Please?
@ sankoobaba,
Thanks!
hmmm...reduce to dust...with time...
wow....
@ PNA,
Thanks!
@ Sourav,
Sure, buddy :)
@ Thinking,
Thanks!
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