It was a summery night. She was lying down, resting her back on a rock with lower half of her body snuggling in the flowing river. Dry breeze played with her hair gently, curtaining her face with stray strands that wafted in breeze like the notes of music. Moon smiled at her from above but the clouds were cruel enough to pull Moon back into them. Moon was equally naughty. Like a playful child she just wouldn't stay still and made them chase her, till they were tired and stopped for a while gasping for breath like old men allowing her to stand afar and watch them with a glee. The game went on and she watched them delightfully as her feet played with water. The silver anklet kept swimming around her ankle silenced for once by the gurgling sound of river. She found the cool water running over her body better than being locked in an AC room.
She looked at the Moon peeping from the clouds. The sight was so beauteous that her lips parted inadvertently to recite Rabindranath but quickly she pursed her lips on realizing that her rendition might not do justice to a great Bard like him. Instead, she let the wind and river create the music of night. The cool flowing water, the dry breeze, the moonlight, the hard rock, the sound of the river, the solitude and her pristine beauty melting into the night seemed just perfect until the dark monstrous clouds gobbled Moon with a thunder and her cloudy friends cried in dollops with a moan.
The colour of the night changed suddenly with the coming of the sinister clouds. Playfulness gave way to seduction. Night turned from silvery to ebony yet it remained as alluring as ever. She lay there savouring the gentle and hard kisses of mighty and tiny droplets. Water gushed on her that was gently lapping till now; even then she lay unmoved with her eyes closed. There was chill in the air and was drenched to the core yet she felt so warm. The warmth grew in her numbing her to the chill around and the icy droplets. This made her feel uneasy and she opened her eyes to see. The heavens roared in anger at her and blinded her furiously. She woke up with a jolt only to find herself drenched in her own sweat in bed. "Huh...another dream", she whined. There was no power and she scrambled in darkness to find herself. She could still hear the heavens roaring and the window panes flapped against the wall in unison with its jarring tone. It was raining outside. She ran to the window to catch shower. Thick and mighty droplets kissed her skin, waking her senses to the elements of nature. And, she knew that the night was back with its dark intentions...

39 comments:
Shas...beautiful post..liked the way you described..
PS: I love the moon :P..
@ Unknown,
Thanks!
I thought you were in love with some human being :P
Again A Nice Post :)
Well Written..
Vocabulary Ache Hai =P
@ Moonshine,
Thanks!
:P
Oh Shas, Beautiful!!!
I expected a suitable background score too... :)
Vivek.
that was great..
the narration....
everything....
Nice flow, kept up the tempo,with the dream nicely juxtaposed at the end, but I still felt I missed the core ! why ?
need to come back again !
Tc
Cu
lovely jubley ... loved it
and the pic of the moon awesome :)
Bikram's Blog
The night was back, with its dark intentions,
but you described it beautifully making it a dark temptation.
:)
I don't wan't to sound conventional, but I can write all those good words like 'Beautiful', Splendid, Amazing...
in the praise for this artful work of yours.
Very well narrated! Lovely :)
Good One!!
Very interesting..
Loved the way u have described the beauty of the night and hers..
Night's dark intention..
Hmmm.
Thoughtful..
*still thinking*
Cheers
Nuts
Beautiful thoughts....poetic writing. It just flows effortlessly.
@ Vivek,
Thanks! I couldn't think of any thats why the protagonist too allows nature to create the music. I wish i could think of some but there is nothing that is coming to my mind, now. It will be great if you can suggest some.
@ Sankoobaba,
Thanks! :)
@ Compassion Unlimited,
Thanks! If you felt like that then there must be something lacking. Plz do let me know where i have faltered or what it was that you found missing.
@ Bikramjit,
Keep loving it!
Thanks! :)
@ Blasphemous Aesthete,
Thanks! The intention of the writer was precisely that ;)
Hope you enjoyed the post.
@ Sunil,
Thanks for being so lavish in your praise :)
@ Vinitha,
Thanks!
@ Survivor,
Thanks!
@ Nipun,
Thanks! Keep thinking and dreaming :)
@ Alka Gurha,
Welcome to my blog and thanks for your comments :)
...adorable writings... you've plotted all the emotions so well... i had a great time readin' it and glad to end my day by this... good night!!!^^
TC.
>Kelvin
hmmm a nice one
yeah night mostly comes wid dark intensions, bt sumtyms i really wonder did d nyt brings darkness or only its our heart dat brings darkness at dat tym jst hiding its treachery in nyt's name....?
@ Windowlad,
Thanks! How sweet! :)
I am happy to know that you felt glad to end your day with this piece. Sweet Dreams :)
@ The Aspirant,
Thanks! Nice question. Its the heart that brings the darkness and the nature seems to imitate the state of our heart call it 'pathetic fallacy'. We see what we want to see.
Dark is not treacherous always. Here, it means the unknown, unseen, hidden desires and something that one has been anticipating. It is a sweet temptation.
nice. so true about the dark...lovely write, very moving...sweet temptation indeed. smiles.
@ Brian Miller,
Thanks! Hope it turns out to be sweet for everybody :)
Hey very well put across ,liked it very much :)
Btw ,yet to see the "The life of David Gale" ,will get back to you once when i have seen it...
A very beautifully written post :).
@ Sathish,
Thanks!
Would like to know your opinion on it. Shall wait to hear from you :)
@ Harini,
Thanks!
beautiful shas :) nicely done
@ ani_aset,
Thanks!
An enjoyable piece of somewhat surreal...well knit with measured passions and blend of poetic turns..
Nice reading after a long retreat to the mountains.
Regards,
hey nicely writen....:)
liked d post...
You..really do have creativity in yourself..just carry on..
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