Trod the path that I was not supposed to,
Left my dusty footprints where I was not supposed to,
Like the Elves I ventured in the beguiling human world in a stupor,
Deluded by my own dreams.
But what are dreams after all if not thought unattainable at first? Attainable things are not called dreams, and when you cannot help leaving foot prints, leave them in such a way that they last for long.
@ Bikramjit, Thanks! I hope that happens soon :) But this piece is not at all related to love. If i would confess what made me write these lines, you would laugh.
@ Blasphemous Aesthete, Thanks! Would like to know your reaction if I were to replace the word "dreams" with "desires". I won't fully agree with your definition of dream. So, what would you call 'attainable dreams'?
33 comments:
its never too late to turn...life is waiting!! :)
ouch.. touchingggggggg
but dont worry you will find someone out there following ur tracks or running with you :)
Bikram's
But what are dreams after all if not thought unattainable at first? Attainable things are not called dreams, and when you cannot help leaving foot prints, leave them in such a way that they last for long.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@ Pri,
Hmm....Thanks!
@ Bikramjit,
Thanks! I hope that happens soon :) But this piece is not at all related to love. If i would confess what made me write these lines, you would laugh.
@ Blasphemous Aesthete,
Thanks! Would like to know your reaction if I were to replace the word "dreams" with "desires".
I won't fully agree with your definition of dream. So, what would you call 'attainable dreams'?
Touche..Life is calling,come ahead..
Tolkien-esqu! good!
Ooh!! Such heavy words..
But very true..Well I feel we should always try and keep trespassing as much as possible :)
@ Devil Incarnate,
Thanks!
@ Sankoobaba,
Thanks! Tolkein-esqu...how?
@ Alcina,
Thanks! Keep trespassing. If caught then pay the fine :P
It is so good. When I saw I title, I ignored it. I thought it is crime story....very pleasantly surprised.
@Shas
Would love to pay in kind rather than cash :P
And to be caught is the fun part of the trespassing i feel :)
चल ए नज़ीर इस तरह से कारवां के साथ के जब तू न चले तो तेरी दासतां चले !
u are talking like some heavenly creature..mistakenly born in this world :P
"You shall never walk alone" :)
@ A,
:)
Thanks! I like to surprise my readers :)
@ Alcina,
Go ahead gal, waiting to catch you red-handed :P
@ Jagdish,
Amazing lines. Thanks! for the visit :)
@ Unknown,
:P
Glad to see you here after ages :)
@ Garf,
Thanks! :):)
hmm...are chasing your dreams bad...is walking a different path...
Very true lines :)
Well written & put across :)
Lost somewhere I was walking
and it happened, Ohhh!!
I din't even realize,
and it happened so what..dont a hide..
May you have more love, peace and light in this time of the year my friend.
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!^^
P.S. I have left something for you. Please click here.
GOD Bless!^^
~Kelvin
very nice lines :)
Footprints are meant to be washed away,
only sands of time remain
Venturing out into unknown
best way to lead the life
Tc
CU
@ Brian Miller,
Chasing dreams isn't bad but they should not lead one to another illusion.
@ Sathish,
Thanks!
@ Makk,
Hmm...not hiding just reflecting on it.
@ Windowlad,
Thanks! So sweet of you to have thought of me. Merry Christmas to you, too and a Happy New Year!
@ The Aspirant,
Thanks!
@ Compassion Unlimited,
True but but a few footprints even time cannot erase.
Good one
@ The Survivor,
Thanks!
The path you trod, was your decision, that became your destiny..
Never regret what you did.
I ruined my own Name
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