lovely..lovely...exactly..when you love somebody from heart!! I can relate to my hubby...I can feel his presence even if he is at the door...so much used his love and presence! very nice stanza...
Very very beautiful. I love Hindi poems....I love Hindi songs based on poetry. This one is beautiful...write more in the same...I mean add a couple of more stanzas..
Lovely one! Short one.. Few words say it all. And translation one is good for those who don't understand hindi.. Sigh, i too wrote some hindi ones but haven't posted ever.
"with you is my morning, with you is my evening, with you is my night, with you is my life, its with you that i live, with you i am me, or else what i am is just another sad story!"
@ A, Thanks for your appreciation. Will try to write more on it. Well! if you like Hindi ones then you can click on the tag Hindi on my page and read other creations which are in Hindi. Happy reading!
38 comments:
hmm...nice poetry....
BUt day should end...no matter how much you need someone to end it with...
So because new morning can bring loved one again....
lovely..lovely...exactly..when you love somebody from heart!!
I can relate to my hubby...I can feel his presence even if he is at the door...so much used his love and presence!
very nice stanza...
Loved the way you described it...
Nice one Shas.. :)
Vivek.
Very very beautiful. I love Hindi poems....I love Hindi songs based on poetry. This one is beautiful...write more in the same...I mean add a couple of more stanzas..
Talk about afternoon, night, sleep,...
Lovely one! Short one.. Few words say it all. And translation one is good for those who don't understand hindi.. Sigh, i too wrote some hindi ones but haven't posted ever.
hey!
thanks lovely indeed :)
Beautiful lines... They say it all... :)
small lines say it all. Nice read. :)
Blasphemous Aesthete
Good!!
absolute beauty, these words...
hey gr8 lines!
liked it...:)
nice. simple yet profund and heart felt...those days do last forever...
Nice one shas.. the picture and the poetry behind this.. The new look on the blog is nice..
Hmm.. sweet one.. lovely lines..
lovely poem, though short
awwwwwwww REALLY is that so :)
TRUE so true
Bikram's
Sweet and Short!
अति सुन्दर..
Very Beautiful.. :)
Awwwwwwwwwwww
just soooooooooooo sweeeet.
Oh, this is lovely! And so very true...the bittersweet of love perfectly defined.
Nice
"with you is my morning,
with you is my evening,
with you is my night,
with you is my life,
its with you that i live,
with you i am me,
or else what i am is just another sad story!"
Lovely! :)
@ Thinking,
Thanks! Ya, it should. There can be many new mornings but the night that never ended can never have a morning.
@ Harman,
Thanks! Wow! so have a wonderful love story to live each day. May God bless you two!
@ Neeha,
Thanks!
@ Vivek,
Thanks!
@ A,
Thanks for your appreciation. Will try to write more on it. Well! if you like Hindi ones then you can click on the tag Hindi on my page and read other creations which are in Hindi. Happy reading!
@ Deepika,
Thanks! Hi, do publish them if you still have them with you. Would love to read them.
@ AS,
Thanks! and welcome.
@ Tanishka,
Thanks!
@ BA,
Thanks!
@ Simply Ridiculous,
Thanks!
@ Shadow,
Thanks!
@ Clouds,
Thanks!
@ Brian Miller,
Thanks!
@ Swatantra,
Thanks! Nice to see you here after a long time :)
@ Devil Incarnate,
Thanks!
@ Tomz,
Thanks!
@ Bikramjit,
Thanks! I wish it was real :)
@ Ugri,
THanks!
@ Arpit Rastogi,
Shukriya!! :)
Beautiful :)
@ Akansha,
Thanks!
@ Talon,
Thanks!
@ The Survivor,
Thanks!
@ The girl in the red coat,
Thanks! You summed it up so beautifully.
@ ph,
Thanks!
short and sweet, chota sa aur pyara sa:-)
As Nana Patekar says about the song - Subah se lekar shyam tak : Baki time alag setting hai kya?
Post a Comment