"Anxious is the mind,
Restless is the soul..."
Best not told.
For their sacredness lies
In the secrets that they hold.
P.S. The title of the poem is not so apt but I wish to name it thus coz it is cryptic in a way for me.
Some tales are left half,
For not every tale can be told.
There are some
That are meant
Only for the soul
And areBest not told.
For their sacredness lies
In the secrets that they hold.
P.S. The title of the poem is not so apt but I wish to name it thus coz it is cryptic in a way for me.
37 comments:
Very profound!!
@ Shilpa,
Thanks! Nice to see you here after ages. Hope you are doing fine.
wow!
this is really nice..very deep and i loved it..honestly :P)
@ AS,
Thanks! Your emoticon is confusing me :P
hii
hehe, sorry typo error!
:)
@ AS,
hi hi...Thanks to that error which made you drop in here for the second time :D
hmmm...very touchy poem...indeed...
I liked reading...it.
Very very nice poem. I do not see any problem with the title either
nice...yeah some tales like river run deep...
So neatly done! Fabulous post. :)
Hi shas,
Thanks for the concern. I've been really busy:( Cross-roads of sorts.
An update will follow soon.
P:S- Writing is down the drain.
Beautifully brought out & picture of Treasure chest safely chained &locked said it all, but then how to address the restlesness & ofcourse the anxiety..!!
TC
CU
Very thoughtful and defined well!!
short and sweet.. like a cherry
Some words are better left unsaid, for they might loose the aura and the sanctity and there is a high likelihood that they might not be received in the way they were meant to be.
Nice one.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Cryptic..As you said.
yep...cryptic..is appropriate!
Nice one.. :)
Cryptic, huh!! Leaving us to read in b/w the lines!! :)
Vivek B.
Loved it!
Like the poem. Very nice :)
@ Thinking,
Thanks!
@ A,
Thanks!
@ Brian Miller,
Ya, true.
@ Pooja,
Thanks!
it was a gr888 post,liked it....:)
I seriously loved it :)
This is a good one.
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Untold stories.. Secrets!
Ummhmm... loved this one.
Wonderful! Really nice.
beautiful!
Talking about title...."cryptic", its appropriate i think.
and the thought expressed are Lovely.
BTW glad to have you at my BLog... i am honored, really.... hope to see you again on my space.
nyc write up :)
n nyc background :)
true..some stories are sacrosanct.we treasure them..we cherish them..we hold them dear and we can only share them with someone who we can trust enough to safeguard them as their own.
nicely expressed!!
nice poem yaar
wow..loved this!
profound! well written..
nice poetry...
try azure-the poetry competition
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hey superb piece of writing...
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