The metal python moves swiftly sucking and spewing people on tiled floors every five minutes. Its a pleasant contrary to it's fleshy counterpart as it is waited upon rather than chased away or beaten to death by the urban beings. But, its quite a scene when the urban man's impatience touches newer heights with every seconds delay of their domesticated python's coming. It takes them no more than a fraction of a second to unleash the monster within. To watch their monstrosity grow and battle with time and others, to become the food of this mighty python can be amusing or infuriating at times. Never will you witness such a scene when the food looked more eager to be devoured than the demon.
The slenderous python obeying techno command stuffs its belly with such irate crowds, night and day with an insatiable hunger and moves on with the same vengeance. Snaking through the dark and deep tunnel, lighting it's way rather than look for light at the end of the tunnel.
Hail! The Metro rail that cometh your way.
P.S. If you fail to understand the post or get lost in the maze of words then you are not to be blamed coz the author herself has got noodled in her own thoughts. If you can then you are a genius :)
P.S. If you fail to understand the post or get lost in the maze of words then you are not to be blamed coz the author herself has got noodled in her own thoughts. If you can then you are a genius :)
25 comments:
Hey nice one..I drew a perfect Blank till I read the P.S, & then I read thru again to enjoy it..you do have a perfect knack of
TC
CU
I am a genius for sure ;-)
The last line cleared it all. Quite an amusing way to entwine words of the wild into the civilized wilderness.
Nice one, beautiful.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@ Compassion Unlimited,
Thanks for having so much of patience and for re-reading it :)
@ Amit,
I never doubted that ;)
@ Blasphemous Aesthete,
Thanks! Welcome to the urban jungle :)
I am still unable to make out which metal python is being riddled here. M i too dumb? :(
please enlighten me. And yes the maze of words caught me as you see.
@ Deepika,
You aren't dumb :)
I am talking about the metro train and how people create a chaos while boarding it. Metal python is nothing but the metro train and urban animals are the so called civilized people who reside in urban/city areas.
good one... the metal python is a perfect analogy for the metro :)
very well ..a perfect way to give a simile...
the urban behavior!
And all this while reading your post this line kept echoing in my mind;
"Damaging or Defacing Metro Rail is a punishable offense!"
Just came back from Rajiv Chowk, the experience is as fresh as your post! Superb comparison Shas! Loved this post :)
It is you who is a genius! Such amazing play of words and still it made the content pretty clear.
hey was that PS to make us read the post again :) he he he
we the urbanites .. god help mankind
Bikram's
Hmmm cracking that was nt difficult as it end by.. seriosly human lives r too intervines with it specialy whn u r in a metro... No wonder..
good post..gr8 idea
I am not.
oops..m afraid f snakes..
hmmm.....good one...I feel the stung by the end....
Deep. Layered:P
@ Anushree,
Thanks!
@ Harman,
Thanks!
@ Sourav,
Thanks! I am glad u liked it.
@ That's me,
Thanks! for calling me that :P
Glad to know that it was comprehensible to you.
@ Bikramjit,
hi hi....yes :D
Thanks!
@ Devil Incarnate,
Thanks!
@ Sankoobaba,
Thanks! :)
@ A,
aaww...don't lose your heart. Give it a another try. If you would still fail to understand then the fault lies with me and not with you.
@ Tomz,
Me, too. :P
@ Thinking,
Thanks!
@ kish,
Thanks! :)
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