How she wished, she could be like the clear running brooks to him instead she turned into a dark murky pond. She didn't know why? Each time he tried to read her thoughts, she turned more obtuse. The more he probed, the more it became dark. When he moved towards her, she coiled inside painfully concealing those wounds from him with fake smiles and tinkered laughter. She kept drowning herself in that darkness, looking for solace. Running away from him each time he tried to reach out to her. How ironical, the more he tried to be with her, the more she moved further away from him. And, when he was not around, she pined for him. His absence was killing.
The hunt longed to get hunted...
Ahh...when is the next full moon?
Waiting for the hunter and the chase to begin.
26 comments:
Short and nice
Alas, the tug towards the predator is ever so alluring, particularly the hunter too wants the prey just like the prey wants the predator.
Reminds me of Twilight,
So the lamb fell in love with a lion. Oh! what a foolish lamp.
Oh! What a masochistic lion.
Nice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
hmm..sad case of inferiority complex. My little knowledge in psychology makes me think like that..
@ A,
Thanks! :)
@ BA,
Thanks! Ya, right. Here, it is not just about the prey and the predator but also about each one of us who get hunted by their own desire.
@ Tomz,
Thanks but it has got nothing to do with inferiority complex. It is about the attraction one has for someone but is not able to recognize it as one goes through conflicting feelings. I wish, you could elaborate on what made you interpret it that way.
hmm...short yet not simple as it seems at first read...
I re-read it to get most of it....
Nice one !
reminds me of something!
nice and crisp!
filling piece
Very well put through :)
ur vocab is also very impressive..
keep em comin
cheers !!
Crush ,Fatal attraction or simply Love..But it does happen ...One tries hard to avoid this conflicting feeling,but really dont know how many have succeeded..nice one Sh
TC
CU
@ Thinking,
Thanks! for sparing your valuable time.
@ Harman,
Thanks! Hope it reminds you of something nice and sweet :)
@ Sankoobaba,
Thanks! :)
@ Sathish,
Thanks! Nice to see you after a long break. Hope all is well at your end. :)
smiles. this could be the romantic hunt as well...pursuit adds quite the element...
This is pretty good stuff!!
@ CU,
Ya, right.
@ All,
Wishing everybody a very Happy Holi!!
@ Brain Miller,
Yep, it does add :)
@ The Survivor,
Thanks! :)
i think the hunter would become the hunted and there would be no chase :P
take care nice post
hmmm a lot of bad happens on full moon :)
all the best for that day then ..
nice short and crisp story
Bikram's
@ Rainboy,
Ha ha...lets see :D
@ Bikramjit,
Hiii.... sooo nice to see you after ages. Was missing your comments on my posts :)
that was really your tru class......its so so gud....
awesum post again...
cheers :)
@ The Aspirant,
*All smiles* Thanks! Happy to know that you liked it :)
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