Breathless I lie.
Thinking, where am I.
Someone raises,
A tomb of words
for my dead bones.
Thinking,
That by singing my life's paeans,
They can do justice to my dead veins.
Alas! their words are hollow,
Every syllable sounds so shallow.
@ Sush, Am Shas :) I shall allow my blog to do the talking rather than me. Thanks! for reading my other posts. It is always a pleasure when someone makes extra effort to read my older posts. Shall wait for your comments on them. TC
25 comments:
short and perfect..good work
@ Sankoobaba,
Thanks!
This is nothing but creative thinking. I loved this one very much.
arrey wah!!
very deep yaar :)
@ Sush,
Thanks! and welcome to my blog :)
@ AS,
Shukriya! but plz don't get drowned :P
all said and done, we still dint introduce each other. My profile is clear though!
:-)
Sad, yet hard hitting words of reality.
Very nice.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
hehehe!
:)
nice!
haiii... am new to ur blog...
loved it... nice work yaar... & i started following it :)
beautiful in its brevity.
hi Shas.. beautiful:)
@ Sush,
Am Shas :) I shall allow my blog to do the talking rather than me. Thanks! for reading my other posts. It is always a pleasure when someone makes extra effort to read my older posts. Shall wait for your comments on them.
TC
@ Blasphemous Aesthete,
Thanks! Life is full of such hard truths :)
@ AS,
*Smiles* :))
@ Harman,
Thanks!!
@ Anjali N. Kumar,
Welcome to my space and for following me. Hope you have a good time here :)
@ HF,
Thanks! for your short and sweet comment :))
@ Being Pramoda,
Thanks!!
hmm....its scary...
@ Thinking,
Hmm....why?
Ouch. This one is powerful.
True. Beautiful. To sum it up in so few words. wow.
Thanks for visiting my blog :)
TM
This was damn good!!
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