Sunday, July 17, 2011

Random Scribblings: 1

And, the journey continues...
But, somewhere, something is lost.

Everything looks fine.

But, somewhere, something is amiss
like the dot on an "i".


24 comments:

Asma Khan said...

Hmmm it happens sometimes that we feel empty inside with a strong feeling of losing something but can't express or understand it clearly... :/

Anonymous said...

Hi,

Journey is something that never stops , its just we thinks too much @ times ..which makes us Nostalgic as then we feel a void within .. it natural ..life is ..a constant change ..but keep faith with self that impt ..rest come sure n soon.

take care.

Harman said...

true...and that is lost..cannot come back..may it be time,life,friend or Love.
very few words but deep and close to reality.

Rajbir Bhattacharjee said...

On a tangent, it is really bad when you can't be sure whether you have locked the door or not.

Amit Gupta said...

ok

Mishi said...

we get we lose..part of the game! life has to go on, no matter what!

Sankoobaba said...

ohh..what did you lose?

magiceye said...

dotting the i is fun! :)

Bikramjit said...

Thats life i guess.. we gain some we lose some ..

wishes your way how you find whatever you miss ..

god bless
Bikram's

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Sometimes a small insignificant Dot too can weigh a Big I down..Thats life..

BN said...

Ah. I've been feeling the same lately :)

The Aspirant said...

tooo gud......awesum wrds

Saibal Barman said...

Yes...somewhere indeed...sensing a loss is more intense than losing...twinges of uncertainty..gnawing trepidation...sullen moments...all evaporating emotions into the mist of incomprehensibility...only faint whispers roam deep inside the womb of thoughts..that somewhere something is missing...
....And.....The candles burn....The pages burn...Burns the last glimpse of those innocuous eyes...Burn colourful wings of the butterfly....Burns a new school tunic.....silently smudging the dot over an I..
Rich reflections indeed !
Take care, my child.

Angels Never Lie said...

life is like dat....whatever u get, how much it wud be,it never luks complete....smth is always missing but den v much cherish wat is present....

Tomz said...

liked the tiny poem

Tanvi said...

When something is amiss, remember its just the start of something more beautiful.... You are just not realizing it :) Because adversity ends here ...

Cheers,

sm said...

ruk jana nahi
journey never stops

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radha said...

A small detail can make a huge void.

ANJALI.N.KUMAR said...

datz true yaar it happen often we vil have evrythng but something is lost... der vil b space for somthng and dat is missing....

A said...

Put a bold dot on i :)))

Nice read though

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Congrats for being listed among the top blogs..you deserve it absolutely..The sensitiveness portrayed in every post of yours no doubt attracts readers ,again & again..congrats again

Ph_ said...

Well said! We do feel so incomplete sometimes...
May for you what is missing is around you just need to have a clearer view! =)

Jack said...

Sh@s,

True, at times we carry on with what we are doing but that spark which used to be there is not visible.

Take care