You no longer savour my silence
And, I your cold stares
My fingers fiddle to fill it with some music.
Borrowed words hurt your eardrum
You inch closer only to show the hurt by hurting me
A bloody battle ensues
Exacting muffled moans for words
Imprinting your dominance
for every feeble defiance
An eye for an eye
A wound for a wound
Giving and taking
pain for pain
hurt for hurt
Every limb struggles to avenge
The done and undone.
My body bears the wounds that your heart suffered.
A wicked smile flickers on your face,
and its sweetness on my lips,
A revenge so sweet.
With the scores settled
The two enemies lie
Recovering, recuperating
In each others arms
Readying for the next battle.
22 comments:
nice one
Very well written Sh.. excellent flow and thoughts ...the concluding words are too too haunting..hope it doesnt happen
thts marvellous....
i want to read it again and again.
Hi Shas.. that's truly heartfelt read..
Hw r u doing..? have good day..
Sh@s,
Facts of life said so beautifully, all fights end in .... and may that remain so.
Take care
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Beautiful... :)
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hmmm....very intriguing....
<3 love it!
Nice! those last words gave a contradictory picture to the poem.. read it again..!
This is really well written.
I know that poetry is open to my interpretation, but I would definitely love to know what was in your mind when you wrote it.
loved reading it .. its beautiful
Bikram's
nice thoughts love it..
..love the line.."ready for next battle."
datz nice one yaar... each words are really striking.. really marvellous... :)
superb yaar
Interesting way of describing this. :)
wow some hard truths...to show the hurt you hurt...and it just keeps cycling the violence...
Your words flow flawlessly :)
The story of the sweet revenge :) Loved it :)
Relationships tend to hit this point sometime or the other, especially when we are not careful. Loved reading it..
hii Sh@s!
its really beautiful :)
beautifully said sh... :)
THIS is lovely <3
Could find time to read your page after long time....and it creates ripples of emotion within readers' minds...I love the expression suppressedly held between words where silence plays with emotive sense...pain is more satisfying than agony...I hear the whispers again...while reading through I remebered the classic by Lord Byron...(When we two parted)...I can't resist to recite a few lines..
...In secret we met
In silence I grieve
That thy heart could forget,
Thy spirit deceive.
If I should meet thee
After long years,
How should I greet thee?
With silence and tears....
Have peace, my child !
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