Monday, November 7, 2011

Do chand ki kahani (A tale of two moons)


एक चाँद ऊपर भी था और एक नीचे भी
एक जुदा था तो दूसरा खफा 
एक आधा था तो दूसरा अधूरा 
दोनों की कहानी एक सी थी 
आधी और अधूरी 
तनहा और जुदा

22 comments:

A said...

So nice. Excellent !!!1 Once I posted a picture of my wife with moon in background..I could take that picture..and gave the caption 'One on sky, one with me.....' Picture was super hit on Facebook.

Sandeep said...

hmmmm nice peotry.....

Bikramjit said...

wow nicely said. But whyyyyyyyyy the one on sky has its own way of getting full ..

the one below needs to do something to be full :)
all the best ..

Bikram's

clouds said...

awesome!.....i loved it.....:)

The Survivor said...

Beautifully put Kudos!!

Ph_ said...

Umm.. I wish I could read Hindi :(

Sh@s said...

@ A,
Wow!

@ Sandeep,
Thanks!

Sh@s said...

@ Bikramjit,
Thanks! Well, thats the irony. It isn't complete even when it appears complete.

@ Clouds,
Thank you for loving it :P

Sh@s said...

@ The Survivor,
Thanks!

Arpit Rastogi said...

Super sexy.. loved it!!!! :) :)

Sh@s said...

@ Ph_,
aaww...I am sorry, I didn't translate it. Well, its about two moons. One refers to the celestial one and the other a human. Their situation or state of being is similar to each other, i.e. both are alone and incomplete.

Sh@s said...

@ Arpit Rastogi,
Thanks! :P

Ankur said...

Liked it.... :)
Half and Incomplete; Lonely and Bereft !!

Sh@s said...

@ Ankur,
Thanks!

Shobha said...

Beautiful verses..
Reminds me of the song:

Aadha hai chandrama raat aadhi.....

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Jindagi aakash me ho ya dharthi par,pharak kuch bi nahi...good one Sh

Sh@s said...

@ Shobha,
Thanks! Oh, nice. I should listen to that song.

Sh@s said...

@ Compassion Unlimitted,
Is it? I thought it was different :D

Dreaming Wanderer said...

kitna dard..
kitni khoobsurti.. :)

AS said...

wow! Loved it..really nice :)

Sh@s said...

@ Dreaming Wanderer,
Jitna dard, utni khubsoorti.. :)

Sh@s said...

@ AS,
Thanks :)