"Stop thinking....start doing....
You can't sit like this whole day and keep thinking. You need to act, quickly." He said.
She sat still..., thinking.
"Action....action....action....
drama....drama...drama...." He chanted animatedly.
"My
hands aren't moving, my legs aren't moving, my mind is freezing....I am
in a stupor...wake me up please....somebody put me into
action....somebody please, please press the button." She replied, helplessly.
"There IS no button. I can't see any." He looked everywhere.
She gaped at him with unchanged expression.
"Waaait....I found something." He jumped as if he had found a switch to heaven.
She still gaped at him with an unchanged look on her face.
He
went around her and wound the key several times till it could turn no
more. She moved frenetically and started clapping. He jumped as she
clapped and watched her with a jubilant smile.
This
was an everyday drama. He knew how to make her dance and when to make
her dance. The key wasn't lost, it was in his hands. A slave to his
wish, she gaped and danced with unchanged expression.
31 comments:
intriguing ...
mysterious ...
and a sweet end ...
wonderfully written ...
top marks !
love is the key :)
makes the world around ...
Everyone needs someone to unlock them with a key to make them move. Thats a very good style of wrting an article.
Some of us have keys to others for sure
You deliver a simple message in a different way..its unique,i would say :)
and is this what love all about?:P
I like the style of your writing! :)
Sweetttt!! :)
I am keen of learning Flash, is there any piece of writing associated to Flash, if okay, then please post it, thanks.
nice ..very well expressed!
Very good
A little toy, a puppet to her master's wish!
Nice,
nice post.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
This is great, so meaningful.
She claps , she dances but with unchanged expression..so he has the key but it doesnt reach her heart!! what a life..so few words but still says a lot..good one Sh
Sh@s,
Read pending posts. Why so sad in previous poem? It is love which makes a person energetic.
Take care
Nice writing style...but so difficult to read with this template background :(
@ Sanket Kambli,
Thanks! Hmm...bitter-sweet.
@ Dreaming wanderer,
Well it does.
@ Elvirah,
Thanks! yep.
@ Womaninlove,
Yep :)
@ The other side of me,
Thanks!
the unmoving face, turning her key to make her dance...its all kinda creepy to me you know...
thinking of it as a puppet for a kids happiness seems good
but me being me if i put it in context to the women of our nation looks sad toooo
having the key to make her dance and clap does not mean he cna make her smile and happy
Bikram's
Love is the key. :)
metaphorical, or symbolic..very interesting, still i cant find its meaning completely
beautiful and thoughtful!
check out my blog too. maybe we want to follow each other? :)
nice one buddy :)
Nice Post!!
hello! how are you?
your blog looks good :)
you can download shrek movie font in my website :)
If it is a metaphorical story,I agree with Bikramjit.It doesn't do good to a woman's personality
Very nicely written
very submissive. well-written.
i must sya , its beautiful, loved the use of metaphors , that beautifully lingers on in the post ...
too good :)
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