To,
Death O' Death,
My Cold Prince,
Where art thou?
Your icy lips never felt
more warm and inviting,
Your freezing arms never seemed
more comforting than today.
Come claim me.
I wait for thee,
loveless and lifeless.
Come claim me before life re-claims me.
Yours,
Deadsoul
Death O' Death,
My Cold Prince,
Where art thou?
Your icy lips never felt
more warm and inviting,
Your freezing arms never seemed
more comforting than today.
Come claim me.
I wait for thee,
loveless and lifeless.
Come claim me before life re-claims me.
Yours,
Deadsoul
30 comments:
"Your icy lips never felt so warm and inviting"
Beautiful deep lines!!
@ Red Handed,
Thanks :)
sincerely wishes the cold prince never get to read this letter.
An undead dead soul?
I feel the soul reaper does not make the dead souls wait, like the living souls have to wait otherwise, all their lives.
Nice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Hope the unposted , now that its posted .. reaches the destination ..
lovely poem
Bikram's
ha, nice...i like this as the note to death...to come claim you before life does once more...humor, yet all too real feeling...
loved d last line - come claim me before life re-claims me...
very nice sh@s :)
go on..
cus ur words cut thru d darkest darknesses..
cus ur words carry d light of ur soul..
as ur soul still shines so bright,
most definitely awaiting u is a beautiful life..:)
Each of the lines are nicely crafted.. loved it from start to end! :)
What a melancholy but beautiful poem.In these few lines you have expressed forcefully the drabness in life
As usual, good one!
Vivek.
as usual loved it from top to end...
an unposted letter... nice one dear :)
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@ Sawan,
Thanks but I am a mortal and immortality would be a curse. So, I hope he reads it someday :)
@ BA,
Hi! Nice to see you back after a long time. Well the deadsoul is still trapped in a body so it wishes to be released which only death can do.
@ Bikramjit,
Thanks! Hope it reaches where its supposed to :)
@ Brian Miller,
Thanks! Dark humour.
Damn Good.
BTW you have not told yet how got in writing such good poems....
Come claim me ....before life reclaims me...loved it..if you dont want life to ( re )claim you..then who is going to claim you !! good one Sh ..as usual
@ Krishnapriya,
Thanks! Nice to see you here :)
@ KParthasarathi,
Thanks!
@ Vivek,
Thanks!
@ ANJALI.N.KUMAR,
Thanks!
Very good one.
Amrit (arealblogger.blogspot.com)
superbly written..
and what a way to write..
very good work..keep it up..
"oveless and lifeless.
Come claim me before life re-claims me."
super !
Converse of "La Belle Dame Sans Merci" theorem.. :)
@ Tall Guy,
Thanks for liking them. Well,...its kinda difficult to put that down in just a few words, probably when I'll be able to do it will let you know.
@ Compassion Unlimitted,
Thanks! If Life wouldn't then something else other than Death might.
@ Amrit,
Thanks!
@ Sanket Kambli,
Thanks for the appreciation :)
@ Rajbir Bhattacharjee,
Did Keats know that his poem would inspire a theorem? :D
really loved this one...
you might check this one :http://www.ashokism.blogspot.in/2005/03/sonnet1993.html
a different take on a similar note!
and thanks for changing the template :)
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